Saturday, July 9, 2011
#047/100 Castle
image: Sarah Richter's 'day 43'
sequel to 'Maze'
entertain me with your words garnished hatred you
storm martyr neighbors in concrete castle lights wash
i'm out of these cells to drown life unlived in vomit
crack missile ghosts shot splintered stairways go round
flip the sound switch to fall i'm creator orchestra
dipping curve throbbing shine gristle curtains glare wide
you can feed me what i need girl pinned to window
pronged exit wind dive blown fast destroy your pathos
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I love the structure here and Day 46/Maze. It made me a little dizzy, actually, in the best ways...and I found myself creating a written response before I was really aware of it. I started with "curtains glare wide" and well spun from there.
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